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Saturday 29 June 2019

My writing sample

Beginning 

Once upon a time there was a little girl named Ella. When she was  born
her dad didn’t like her so her dad started to run away. Left Ella with her
mother. And when she Grow older she all ways do the job for her family.
The world all  hated ella. The family all ways let Ella sleep outside. When
The people go past they throw rubbish at her. 

Middle 
The next day Ella start to run away in the forest. When she got in the
middle of the forest.  she saw a house that was a little bit big for her. So she
went into the house and called out hi hi is anybody here. Nobody answer so
she slept there forever.

End 
In 20 years Ella went back to town. On tuesday there she saw a concert where
there was  a lot of food and clothes. But there was one thing that Ella did had.
It was money but he saw a man by the food so Ella ran to the man and aksed
can I have some food but the man said do you think I’m your dad no
so GO GO AWAY. so Ella ran but this girl she was so so kind. The girl Had heard  what
the man said so the girl said came over at my house. The next day Ella was so S
urprise that she Found a girl to help her find a house to sleep. 

THE END

1 comment:

  1. Hi Sienna, Its Hannah from Karoro School. Your writing is great but next time maybe you could make it make more sense. It was great to see you using paragraphs and thank you for sharing your work. I m going to be your blog buddy. Here is my blog https://karorohannahh.blogspot.com/

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