My writing sample

Beginning 

Once upon a time there was a little girl named Ella. When she was  born

her dad didn’t like her so her dad started to run away. Left Ella with her

mother. And when she Grow older she all ways do the job for her family.

The world all  hated ella. The family all ways let Ella sleep outside. When

The people go past they throw rubbish at her. 

Middle 

The next day Ella start to run away in the forest. When she got in the

middle of the forest.  she saw a house that was a little bit big for her. So she

went into the house and called out hi hi is anybody here. Nobody answer so

she slept there forever.

End 

In 20 years Ella went back to town. On tuesday there she saw a concert where

there was  a lot of food and clothes. But there was one thing that Ella did had.

It was money but he saw a man by the food so Ella ran to the man and aksed

can I have some food but the man said do you think I’m your dad no

so GO GO AWAY. so Ella ran but this girl she was so so kind. The girl Had heard  what

the man said so the girl said came over at my house. The next day Ella was so S

urprise that she Found a girl to help her find a house to sleep. 

THE END

I want to see

One night there was a concert going  on. This lady she was Adriana's fans. Adriana was going to
the concert to sing her new song. The lady Was so Excited to see Adriana's sing on the stage. The
lady was so early to Tell Adriana that  the lady is her friend. Adriana sang a song for the lady.
After three hours some people started to come to the concert so Adriana sang her new song and
ever/everybody shouted out go Adriana  and said you got it you can do it. Next week Adriana said
there going to be another  concert. But the people said who is doing it next week . it is Kasalina and
she is going to do  her new dance.