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Monday 29 June 2020

green sea turtles

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  1. Unknown29 June 2020 at 14:07

    Hi Sienna
    How are you today? I think that your writing about swimming with a green sea turtle is amazing. What could you do to make your writing a bit more descriptive?! Maybe next time you could try and make your story a bit bigger I would love to read more of your amazing writing. I hope you find my comment helpful.
    Belinda

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  2. Sienna30 June 2020 at 10:10

    thank you for that belinda. it was helpful

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  3. Sienna30 June 2020 at 10:10

    from Sienna

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